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Avalon Tale:
-Written version incomplete
-Updates approx. every other weekend

To Fall and Rise Again:
-Written version is finished
-Updates approx. every Friday

Against All Odds:
-Most characters drawn out
-Chapter 5 not yet started
-Updates when I feel like it

The Celestial Dog:
-On hold


Art Trades:
:iconarukardis:
-my part done
:icondarkkyothepsycho:
-my part done
:icongamerwolfgirl:
-my part done
:iconcarlie-nuclearzombie:
-my part done

Sketch Trades:
:iconemperormyric:
-my part done
:icondelusionalpuffball: [link]
-not started

*** It may take a few weeks to finish full color pictures ***
*** Will attempt to update stories weekly ***

Critiques


While this is very nicely painted piece and those flower petals are awesome, there's still a lot of room for improvement. First off, ...

by *caligis

I really like the style with which you drew this and the amount of detail in the creature. he shading done on the head looks especially...

by =Ruth-Tay

When I saw this picture in my inbox the first thing that struck me was the shape of the rocks. The larger one seems almost like a human...


Well for starters, I'd like to point out all the good stuff so you can get a warm fuzzy feeling inside right before I rip your drawings...

I like to critique things. I am a harsh and honest critic. If you want a critique or red-lines, just ask and I'll get to it when I have time. Otherwise, submit it to this group: #SeriousArtists I critique almost everything that goes through my message box from them and there are tons of other people in the group who may critique you. But if you're going to get all butthurt gtfo and grow up.

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3 deviants said I take the busI take the bus as a metaphor:
a desert island populated
by people who have no choice but to
wake up every morning and endure each other

Survivors

Because that’s all we humans do
we survive
pretending not to stare at each other
standing so close together
that the spaces in between are ignored

The only time we’re ever still
is on a moving bus

I stare at their shoes
to avoid staring at their faces
and try to guess
what kind of person they are
and whether or not they’ll survive

There are two types of people in this world:
those who wear different shoes every day
and those who don’t notice what they put on their feet

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3 deviants said And I Love YouIt was the same routine
With snacks of protein
It passed every single day
With no deviation in way

“Where’s the venue?”

A greeting in the morning
Said from under the awning
A goodbye before eight
Familiar enough to narrate

“Does a used ticket have any value?”

A text during lunch
Sent with a casual keypunch
And a conversation at night
As the sky loses its light

“Could you pick up a menu?”

Every message
Even those with baggage
Starting with her name
Then always ending the same

“And I love you.”
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2 deviants said The Coffee ShopIt is the
Early morning.
Sitting by the window,
She lifts the cup to her lips.
A sip, steaming and hot,
Trickles down,
Refreshing.
A flicker of light
Across her warm brown
Cheeks as she sits, still, at
The coffee shop table.
She sighs,
Causing the
Egg colored paper
To rustle in the warm wind.
She picks up her receipt,
Stuffing it into the
Sweet pea purse
She carries.
The empty cup
Tumbles into the trash,
To be taken away in the evening.
She steps into the parking lot,
Ready to embrace the day,
At her desk job in an
Accounting
Agency.
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1 deviant said Greeting the SunlightThe darkness parts as my eyes open,
the light clearing the dust that settled deep in my mind,
pushing away the half remembered scenes that filled it moments before.
My hand moves up, lifts away the load that pushed me into sleep,
reaches for the sun, and pulls me out of revelry.
No more can I bury the sadness of yesterday, and it falls upon me,
so heavy I can hardly breath.
I shrug it aside, as casually as I must every day,
and get to my feet, no time to waste.

I dance slowly round the room,
tired limbs finding tasks, swinging through the air,
I pull on clothing, surprised at how thin the fabric is,
how little there is to shield me from all.
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No deviants said Every MorningMorning comes
As always
Another day
I feel the weight
Of your head
On my shoulder
As dust-motes
Fill the room
Lit up by the sunlight
Through a crack
In the curtains

That sunlight is
The world outside
The world we’re
Hidden away from
In the bubble
That is our bedroom
I turn my head and
Open my eyes
To look into your
Upside-down
Sleeping face

The world stands still
Everything is silent
Outside our bubble
There’s you
And there’s me
And that’s all there ever
Needs to be
Awake, you wrap your arms
Around my head
And rest your forehead
Against my lips

The world carries on
The children call
Finally we move
To confront that

Guise

Journal Entry: Sun Jun 16, 2013, 7:07 AM
Poetry | Adopts | Commissions | Livestream

I changed my mind...the contest will end when I finish the paper dragon I am currently working on (I'm sorry it's taking me so long...I'll try to get it done within this month. School was just crazy busy the last few months and then graduation parties and wow no free time). SO ANYWAY IT WILL PROBABLY TAKE ME ANOTHER MONTH TO GET THAT DONE SO GO ENTER MY CONTEST THEN YOU COULD WIN A PAPER DRAGON!!! [link]

ART STATUS:
commissions: OPEN
trades: CLOSED
requests: CLOSED

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  • Mood: Tired
  • Reading: The Good Food Revolution
  • Watching: Dexter

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Hey, I'm DireWolfwere (no shit). I need money and I can draw stuff so give me money ):<
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I do art trades and requests (rarely) too so don't be scared to ask. I'll either say yes or no, I won't rip your head off or anything haha.

Hey, I write things and cosplay too. Look at me, jack of all trades.

List of stories if you're interested (you're interested, right?):
Against All Odds
Avalon Tale
The Celestial Dog
To Fall and Rise Again

Misc Comics
Misc Stories
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~MsMoonlight1 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for joining :iconoc-stars-welovethem: where we let your OC or OC's shine like stars :star:
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welcome to live-love-write! :D
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thanks for being my friend >w< <3
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~Story-of-a-Mind Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the Lama :)
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~Carlie-NuclearZombie May 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I must say you have some outstanding work! C:
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